Application Essays

The application essay is your story. With specific feedback, I help you develop an insightful, authentic essay, one that speaks to your audience, the admissions committee. Application essays include personal statements, statements of purpose, Common App essays, University of California application essays, medical school match essays, and other supplemental essays up to 1,500 words.

Ready to get started? Here’s how we can work together:

1. Send me your rough ideas or first draft to komal@threerevisions.com in Google Docs or Microsoft Word. Include pertinent information on the program or your general goals.

2. Receive my first review within 72 hours after payment. The first review includes detailed feedback on the strength and clarity of ideas, organization, coherence, development, transitions, originality of thought, and some glaring sentence errors.

3. After reviewing my comments and making necessary changes, I will complete a second review on your new draft.

4. We repeat the process until your essay is ready to submit. On average, it takes “three revisions” or rounds of feedback to arrive at a strong, final draft.

5. Submit to your program with eager anticipation!

Pricing:

$300 (for 1,500 words & 3 full reviews)
$90/hour

Please note: I do not write or ghostwrite application essays, but my professional feedback will provide you with specific suggestions to showcase your original story and your authentic voice—and move you quickly to a strong final draft.